Divergent poem and ENGLAND

HI!!!

WE GO TO ENGLAND AND I'M/WE ARE VERY EXCITED!!!
WE GONNA SLEEP IN A HOST FAMILY AND WE GONNA SHOP IN LONDON!!!
But I made a Divergent poem:

Divergent

You’ve to choose one of the five,
Therefore is a test, to know in which you can survive.

A dog and a knowing face,
I belong in no place.

The result: I’m Divergent,
No, it’s not an ailment.

They can’t control me,
I’m not the peaceful, not Amity

I’m not honest, not candor,
I can’t tell everybody the truth anymore.

I’m in three factions: Erudite, Abnegation and Dauntless
I’m brave, intelligent and selfless

I choose Dauntless,
I’m brave I guess

I’ve to jump off a train,
I didn’t have pain.

From the 20 people of us, only 10 can be Dauntles.
The rest would be factionless.

I become Dauntless, woohoo!!
I think about what I want to do

But then it’s night.
The sky is bright.

People walk away and go to the train,
You know what they gain?

They gain a weapon and don’t look at each other,
the train goes to the faction of my mother.

We’ve to kill the people from Abnegation,
I get-away to the station.

My mother died,
my brother and father cried.

We stop the system,
We throw a gun.

The last thing I see from Dauntless
are amazed people, I’m factionless.

the end..............

So I/we will give feedback after England!!!!!!!

(sorry for the bad English)

Love

Donna